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Discussion of "Playing Marbles with Your Neighbors" by zatoichi

1 hebe6405 8 years, 4 months ago Reply

This was absolutely, horrifically, hilarious. The scene was painted out artistically and the dialog was bubbling over with character. Splendid imagery. Kudos on a great chapter.

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2 honeygloom 8 years, 4 months ago Reply

"hybrid of ADHD and Parkinson's." O so funny. Absolutely a great chapter. Spectacular work!

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2 zatoichi 8 years, 4 months ago Reply

I really appreciate the support. I've done quite a bit of writing but I've never tried to publish anything before. Thanks for the confidence boost. Let me know if you want to work on anything together.

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1 Cheeseliker 7 years, 8 months ago Reply

Good start, funny and interesting. Did the busdriver vanish? Is this the Rapture? WHo knows?

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