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Discussion of "Hitting the Nail on the Head chap4" by zatoichi

2 honeygloom 8 years, 4 months ago Reply

Such a great character, really nice work!

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1 hebe6405 8 years, 4 months ago Reply

Nice advancement of the plot. Noticed a few typos at the end. I like the flavor of the dialog and the interation of the characters.

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