Discussion of "Hitting the Nail on the Head chap4" by zatoichi
honeygloom 6 years, 8 months ago
Such a great character, really nice work!
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hebe6405 6 years, 8 months ago
Nice advancement of the plot. Noticed a few typos at the end. I like the flavor of the dialog and the interation of the characters.
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