Hey..very good.I don't really know what to say.Everyone else kinda covered it.

Uh...I'm jealous.You continued my story and you may have done better.You used better adjectives.And said things that I forgot to say in the first chapter.Although,I think I would have ended it a little different.Good job though.

Thanx entity.

Hey,this is a reall good story.I give you huge props.It's better than anything I've written.
Great job.

I can read it it's easy.I think it would be harder to write it.

I'm thinking about whether or not I should do anyhting else.To be honest,I thought it was kinda stupid.