Discussion of "-_The Ultimate Sacrifice Chp. 1 -_" by xfionax

Whoooeeee, let the ride begin! Damn, you hooked me with this one and kept it there all the way through and beyond.

Next chapter tomorrow, right? LOL.

Superb writing, storyline and characterization! Loved it!

Aww thanks writer! Tomorrow? Hmmm, considering my track record I probably won't get to it until about a year from now. lol jk jk. Umm Ill have it up soon....hopefully. Thanks again for continuing to read my chapters. I really do appreciate it!

LOL I loved this, if it took a year for the next one I think I might cry. I'm definitely going to wait as patiently as I can for the next one though. Good work, the only thing that bothered me, only because I'm stingy and grumpy, is how you used "You're" instead of "your". xD Sorry, it's really rather insignificant to the mistakes I make, but overall I loved your story. I voted generously for it too ;D

Thanks Kellums!

Lol thank you for pointing that out actually. When I'm chatting online with my friend I also use 'your' instead of 'you're' and she always catches it. I tell her to leave me alone because if I was writing an essay or...ahem story lol...I wouldn't do that. Looks like she was right so thanx for pointing that out xD.

Right, so about that next chapter.....hmmm tomorrow (possibly today)?...maybe lol