Discussion of "The Bully's Tears" by xdshadowscythe

hope i captured the spirit of it at least. couldve been longer or more developed, but at least its out there.

Oh man you sure escalated this! Harrowing, gut-wrenching with an unexpected, original turn. No complaints from me! Thank you for mashing this and taking it to the next level of intensity.

you are very welcome! i still want to see what you can do with one of mine!

Brutal... no question here how Joey turned out the way he did. I have two questions:

1- what will happen when the ambulance arrives and Joey is getting the **** beat out of him with a chain?
2- With all the anger mangament and therapy, how did it never come out that Joey's parents beat him?

Overall though, the imagry was great and I think you really got the tone of Joey's voice down perfectly. Nice work XD;)

to be honest, i have no **** idea. but if and when i decide to add anotehr chapter to this, you can bet its gonna get even more hairy.

in terms of hairyness, take robin williams, and just strap a bunch of hair band wigs to him. ill see what i can do to raise the bar even more.

i have the perfect **** idea. you love this. mua ha ha ha. evil laughter all around.