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"Infinite Web, The charcoaled remains of the promised souls" -> (2 skipped) -> "the serated paths of the three" -> "The ruler of the kingdom of the raging dragon, Bo Fu Chan!"

cao dongs jump rope assault.  by xdshadowscythe

a few weeks later there was a knock at the gates of the raging dragons kingdoms gate. the local guards were well trained despite having no experience at all and it was a pleasant day with a great summer breeze. "who is it?" the first asked calmly, thinking nothing of it at first. a sqeaky young boys voice crept through the crack between the gate doors. "it is only i, cao dong, here from the kingdom of blunt heavy things." the guards again, could only chuckle at the name of the kingdom. "well, thats nice boy. what do they want?" there was another few seconds of silence before the voice crept through the door again. we only wish to borrow a pound of sugar. we like making cookies. its weird i know, but that is how the kingdom is run."

the gaurds burt out laughing with no real way of knowing if it was actually a boy or not. "isnt that sweet? ok, tell you what kid, you grow your own sugar, and then well take you-" the first guard was interrupted as a metal rope attached to a small weight wrapped around his neck. the second gaurd was about the ring the alarm bell to warn bo fu chan, but he was struck down by the kingdoms name sake. namely a blunt heavy object. the voice crept through again as the ninja opened the gates. revealing a tall monster of a man in his late thirties. "we just wanted to buy a cup of sugar.. and take over the kingdom. mind if we come in?"

the man had ten layers of mucles, each provided additional strength if the situation called for it. "now attack my minions, let not a person excape here alive!"

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Date created: June 23, 2009
Date published: June 23, 2009
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Word Count: 324
Times Read: 224
Story Length: 1