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"Infinite Web, The charcoaled remains of the promised souls" -> "The Clarv: Year One"

dan jorg, evil and good pure and crystal lake.  by xdshadowscythe

three souls were sent to the crystal lake so that they could moniter the situation there with out complicating matters. this wouldve been a successful ploy had those three souls turned into dan jorg, who decided that a human form would best suit him, plus the contantly fight pure twins, evil the sight taller soul whose form was a ball of purple light, and her brother good, whose form was a ball of red light. since evil and good had no grounded bodies they could fly as high as they wanted.

which never really helped dan in the least. one day while the crystal lake was in the process of recieving seven more souls to help out the original three, evil and good had gotten into a quickly heated debate about where the real problem with the crystal lake would lie. "i think its the crystals themselves, im not really sure why though, something just doesnt seem right with them." evil said slowly so her brother would think she was going to hit him. "no... i think its certain aspects of the waters ph balnce. its strong enough for a man, but not really for a owman." evil then socked good in the face and sent him floating across the surface of the lake.

"you do know that your both right about the water and the crystals?" dan said out of the side of his mouth while walking over to the holographic display. "really?" they both said in unison while good ran back to evil and flung her high into the air by the energy wisp that mightve been her hair. "yeah, im not sure why but the individual signitures that are emenating from the crystal patches in the nothern sectors are a bit higher then those in the east and western sectors, and the southern crystal arent getting that much power for that matter either."

both evil and good looked at jorg with astounding confusion. "what the hell are you trying to say?" good shouted with a slight hint of anger towards his sister. jorg cleared his throat, turned to good and brought him and evil over to the display so that they could see for themselves. "im saying that we need to find a way to get these sectors energy levels balanced right quick or other parts of the world the clarv are supposed to be fixing are going to have a heap of trouble on there hands." jorg explained. evil nodded the best a ball of purple light could nod.

"i see what you mean there jorg. i see what you mean." with that evil and good began fighting each other again. leaving jorg and the other seven souls wondering what to do about the twins. 

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Date created: May 20, 2009
Date published: May 20, 2009
Comments: 1
Tags: charcoaled, clarv, dan, evil, good, infinite, jorg, of, project, projects, promised, proposal, propose, pure, remains, seven, souls, the, web
Word Count: 517
Times Read: 318
Story Length: 3
Children Rank: 2.4/5.0 (2 votes)
Descendant Rank: 0.0/5.0 (3 votes)