Good work. The last line had me laughing.

Hey, nice work. I read all of Gunther. Your detail is brilliant. Keep up the good work and I look forward to future stories of yours.

Excuse the typos above. I am trying not to be anal about that. I did leave out a lot of the story because I wasn't sure if it was too much detail. I had originally thought of having background information on everyone in the diner. Sort of letting the reader know the events that lead each character into the same location as Max.

The location is suppose to be a diner, not a restaurant. In a diner, you see more of a variety of characters, especially at night. So, the woman with the kid was my version of a single mom who who works late and treated her with a late night meal. I guess I should have added that in there. It sounded good in my head. Maybe I should have added more grungy details as well. But, thanks. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks so much. I was trying my hardest to make him seem out of it. And yes, detail is very important to me.