Discussion of "The Life of an Apple" by xXxFiremanxXx

Please read my story and give me a critic on it in the comment box so I can maybe change it to make it a more fruitful story. I will post another one soon I hope you enjoy storymash users :)

This story is amazing and has been clearly and carefully thought out!

Oh my goodness. You are so... talented! After only the first few lines, I was already drawn in. And the ending had me crying. Absolutely amazing!

Well thank you I appreciate your compliments although I spotted my first eye sore I said cub of Joe instead if cup hopefully the readers dont get to mad at me

Jimmy thanks for your compliments to

wow! that was amazing i was into the story, I could just see the man and woman and everything it was sad and great please continue :):):)

wow! that was amazing i was into the story, I could just see the man and woman and everything it was sad and great please continue :):):)