Discussion of "Burning Afflictions" by xXxFiremanxXx
xXxFiremanxXx 2 years, 6 months ago
I just re read this and realized that this could be takin the wrong way in the prologue. This never has happened to me just so everyone knows it is just part of the story and I am not suicidal.
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MrLightening 2 years, 6 months ago
Not bad. Great descriptiveness, sense of atmosphere and characterization. I think I wanted a little more out of it though. I little more realism, and a little more unexpected :)
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