Discussion of "Feasting From Afar (3)" by wsells
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honeygloom 6 months, 2 weeks ago
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Wow! I'm going to have to sleep on this one I think. Surrounded by werewolves and my character without a pea shooter. Not so much a twist as a hand grenade:)Nice work! |
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writerwannabe 6 months, 2 weeks ago
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Holy moley, wsells, what a ride!!! I am sitting here laughing and shivering at this fabulous display of imagination and writing. As I got to the next to last paragraph I thought, "No..he can't be killing off the preacher now"...lol, but danged if you didn't send in replacements. Fantastic!!! |
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ShadowMan 6 months, 1 week ago
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Werewolves, soldiers and preachers -- OH MY! Way to drag the old soldiers into the fray, it added an element of camp to the story; and the appearance of more critters ratchets up the scope of the tale nicely. I wonder how the next author in line will link this in with the preachers visit and comments. |
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Psycho1_77 6 months, 1 week ago
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This is a pretty fun one... great turn of events... |
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theblackhand 5 months, 2 weeks ago
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Superb writing.... |
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dogdeity11 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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This was fantastic: “…tore through him faster than a unripened habanero through a sphincter.” |
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