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Discussion of "Feasting From Afar (3)" by wsells


1 honeygloom 6 months, 2 weeks ago Reply

Wow! I'm going to have to sleep on this one I think. Surrounded by werewolves and my character without a pea shooter. Not so much a twist as a hand grenade:)Nice work!


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1 writerwannabe 6 months, 2 weeks ago Reply

Holy moley, wsells, what a ride!!! I am sitting here laughing and shivering at this fabulous display of imagination and writing. As I got to the next to last paragraph I thought, "No..he can't be killing off the preacher now"...lol, but danged if you didn't send in replacements. Fantastic!!!


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1 ShadowMan 6 months, 1 week ago Reply

Werewolves, soldiers and preachers -- OH MY! Way to drag the old soldiers into the fray, it added an element of camp to the story; and the appearance of more critters ratchets up the scope of the tale nicely. I wonder how the next author in line will link this in with the preachers visit and comments.


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1 Psycho1_77 6 months, 1 week ago Reply

This is a pretty fun one... great turn of events...


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1 theblackhand 5 months, 2 weeks ago Reply

Superb writing....


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1 dogdeity11 4 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

This was fantastic: “…tore through him faster than a unripened habanero through a sphincter.”
Wsells, you really took a hold of this storyline and defined it. Nicely done. This is the first storyline that I recall that took a direction such as this. Another plus. Too many EVIL PREACHERS!


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