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Discussion of "CoC: Tit for Tat" by wsells


1 Cheeseliker 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

Great addition here wsells, when it turned out Shooter was a woman, I was damn surprised. The descriptions great, as is the dialogue. Good job.


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1 rocklee11416 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

Yup another great installment, I may tag in!!! :D


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1 honeygloom 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

Nice;) I'm not sure why it was important to point out that Shooter is hetero... that part of the conversation seemed out of place. Otherwise, great addition!


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1 wsells 1 month, 1 week ago Reply

Thanks. It was soley about keeping Julie off balance and then getting her to trust. Shooter had her on the ropes and wanted to keep her there to eventually make her point about utter control versus shooting the guy. I think Shooter's a little bizarre and her sense of humor is the same.


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1 writerwannabe 3 weeks, 1 day ago Reply

I'm way late getting back to this. Super job, wsells! I love your Shooter character!


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