Discussion of "Blond Over Blue 2" by wsells
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honeygloom 7 months, 3 weeks ago
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Very nice, I liked how you kept a sort of friendly awkwardness between them. |
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writerwannabe 7 months, 3 weeks ago
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Good mash, wsells. LOL...for a second I thought you had changed the character names and then, when I checked I realized how much I liked the name "Teagan". I, too, liked how you kept the "tone" of the story going as honeygloom started it. |
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theblackhand 7 months, 3 weeks ago
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Great second chapter-very wise of you to keep the same flow. |
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wsells 7 months, 3 weeks ago
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Thanks folks - I wanted to twist the end more but didn't just in case you had one |
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honeygloom 7 months, 2 weeks ago
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Twist away! It would be fun to see what we both come up with simultaneously. |
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