Discussion of "In a Nuts Hell ch. 4" by wsells

I actually like the direction you've turned the story and I like the fact that someone finally decided to jump in and add to it. I have my own ideas about where to take this, but I'd like to see where you can take it as well. Maybe you could go back to the previous chapters and change the direction earlier in the story. I'd like to see what ideas you might have to branch it another way. After I finish writing this, I'm gonna take a look at some of your other work.

I enjoyed everything so far - I don't think I could take it any other way from any other point - except maybe to avoid the time warp thing with cobwebs in the bar, deserted streets etc. I'd hoped you were answering that puzzle. Otherwise, the Nuts Hell factor is easy to play on. Thanks for the props and appreciate any feedback on my other stuff.

I finished my version of ch 4... with another wide opening for multiple directions...

Cool - BTW thanks for the note on The Wall - appreciate it. It's actually something I didn't write at work with the boss snooping and the phone ringing and clients clamoring and....

I feel like most of the stuff I write here is condensed into a nuts hell just to publish as quickly as possible.

I save drafts as I go so that I have time to think it all out without interuption. I started doing it after I published a couple of posts with massive typos because my situation was causing me to hurry through some parts. I wanted Nut's Hell to be representative of some of my better work.

It shows. Can't do that here. Our computers crash quicker than heroin booters.