Discussion of "If I ever lose my mouth..." by wsells

Well written, but I feel as if parts of it seem forced. I might continue this in the future, though.

Yeah, probably. I was trying to show the contrast between a wasted juvenile life complete with Dr. Seuss stuff and the more mature soul-based Bardic life trying to pull away from the former. I think :-)

Well, whatever, I thought it exemplary to jump to Cat Stevens's "Moon Shadow". I used to love that song, but now it scares me!!! Great job!!!

Hey there, we decided that for # sake and a smoother operation, we are going with 9 authors, so welcome aboard... The chapter to continue is October Chill, the original deadline for the first entry is Thursday, but to be a little more fair, I am giving you until Saturday, but from that point you gotta try to catch back up.... second installment due by Tuesday and then a chapter every 5 days until we've all written 9... once again... welcome aboard... hope you see this before it's too late...

holy moley - just getting over strep and haven't even read any stories -sheeeeeeeet mon! Which path?

forget last comment - I get it. Duh!

I read this chapter, partly because of the author and partly because of the title...lol. Everytime I perform somewhere, "Moonshadow" is on the list! I love how you mixed it into the story. Great job.