Discussion of "Conspiracy" by wsells

Great last line! I love the character interested to see what you will do next with him.

thanks - got an idea, but who knows - someone (you?) could jump in and take it in a way I never dreamed.

The situation is great. Hitchcockian! After my second reading, ideas for the continuation are already starting to surface. 5 stars.

Thanks, long "I" name. The idea (in my mind) is a man (kills his wife and claims that he contracted someone (our hero) to do the deed. He plants evidence, etc. It's revenge for something (feels he got ripped off in a car deal) mundane, but doesn't care what happens to him as long as the other guy goes down. Maybe he's got terminal illness or just doesn't care - I don't know. 2nd chapter is up.