Discussion of "October Chill: Emptiness (5)" by wsells

Good job, wsells!! I thought you showed his "sane" side very well while maintaining the fact that he definitely not exactly sane, anymore. Moving the story to a new locale and bringing the preacher back into the picture was a very nice plot move.

Sounds like there might be a whole mess of destruction coming to that apple orchard. Great writing and great leave!

Great foreword movement. I love change of scenery. A few of the stories have a somewhat claustrophobic feel being stuck in like one or two settings.
Tension is rising in this one.