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Discussion of "ADVANTAGE - Chapter One "Wronged"" by wsells


1 wsells 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply

gee, that's novel - a 1 star vote and no comment. Wanker!

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1 Jackoalltrades 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply

I like it wsells. You could easily have a lot of fun with this.

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1 wsells 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply

Thanks J.O.A.T.!

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2 honeygloom 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply

Creative! I love this, definitely something fun to mash!

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1 writerwannabe 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply

Creative is an understatement!! Outstanding is an understatement! Really, wsells, I loved this. Can you tell? lol.
As JOAT wrote, I plan to have fun with this as soon as I can get to it...5 points!!

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1 VinnieP 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply

Great story! It throws up so many possibilities. Imaginative, exciting, and well-written. A nice breezy read that can definitely turn into something more exciting.

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1 nashvillebecker 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply

I love your starts, wsells. Always have. CoC? Genius!

I fear one of their unscreened temps may have stolen my entire sock drawer.

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1 wsells 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply

lol

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1 theblackhand 4 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Great story. You are a wonderful author. Now, will you contribute to my "30 days" storyline?

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1 wsells 4 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Sorry, TBH, we had a kitchen fire and had to relocate for 6-8 weeks. With work and all it has been hectic. I had Advantage in my brain for weeks and finally found time to spell it out. Thanks for the offer. I would like to, when I can get to a puter (I'm at work now) and have the time.

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1 Cheeseliker 2 months ago Reply

Awesome start, really leaving it open-ending for a good mash. Interesting and creative idea, this CoC. Me thinks they could get up to no good very easily...

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1 rocklee11416 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply

Yup Genius, amazing, mind-boggling experience I had while reading this. I started from the middle thinking it was gonna be boring got to the end, and then went straight up to the top lol. NICE!!!!!!

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1 bigcountry1299 4 weeks, 1 day ago Reply

I loved the story line, left me wanting to read more.

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