Discussion of "CoC: Off to Shooter" by wsells

WELCOME BACK!!! I was so happy to see Nash mash your original chapter, a. because he did his usual fantastic job of it and, b. because you came back. This was really fantastic, wsells! I nearly jumped out of my chair when Julie began beating the clerk with the receiver...lol...what a fabulous twist in the story! Excellent dialogue (your trademark) and narrative. I love it all over again.

Thanks, Lex! It's good to be back. Nash has a way of compelling people to get off their feet and sit down on their asses :-) Or, something like that. Stop picking your nose and type something??? Anyway, drop me a line and let me know how things are going on your end.

Crazy awesome twist here, loved it and is keeping me interested in the story.

Awesome Wsells!! Glad to read you again;)

Hey Cheese and HoneyG! Thanks for the props. Glad to see you're still plugg'n away. Lots of changes to the site - no doubt due to you guys, and Dog and Nash. I gave myself a 4.5 just because I could! :-)