Wow, a middle finger on TV.
How many middle fingers will a kid see in his lifetime? a ton.

WWB make it a "religious" twist. The girl is being sent by her "God" to do things in Dallas... missionary work or not. The guy is being sent by the other one to stop her or summin :)

Hey this is a good poem. It flows well and is easy to read! Ive read most of your poems this morning between coffee and i am impressed. I , too, write poems but in a whole different genre so it is good to read some "other" stuff!

I wish falling asleep really was this easy, though.

Thank you :)

Exactly. I think people shouldnt be afraid of the consequences of fighting back. I think the consequences of NOT fighting back will be way more severe... but just my thoughts. I'm not a political or financial expert, but I dont think things are gonna end good.

Hey I really like this poem, perry.

It happens so often that people arent prepared for how screwed twisted and scary the real world is...

BY THE WAY: smoking green shouldnt be considered obscene... ;)

finally a poem thats not so lovey dovey (besides mine :D) I like it, critical!

If you believe in very minimalistic miracles this is a good piece. Although, for some reason it came across as if I was sitting in a church listening to some priest or what not. But, I havent spent much time in a church so that opinion won't measure to much. I think it was well written.. though I personally would have made a bit more pessimistic ;)

Keep going with your prose.

Its good, its simple. I would have dragged it out a bit more... but thats me :)

The "F word" helps sometimes.