Discussion of "Wild Hair" by writerwannabe

Nope, not done with the novel but, I've hit a "block". Dang, only a handful of chapters from the finish line. You'd think that seeing light at the end of the tunnel would be impetus enough..but, you'd be thinking wrong...lol.

Figured posting something original, here, would help. I hope so...;o)

This is something that is becoming a common thing. We had an occurence down here in NC where a gentlemen had infected numerous people purposely before he was caught. It's some scary ****...that is why I stay monogamous with my beautiful wife.

Yeah, but the problem is you don't get into many threesomes with monogamy;)

Thanks, TBH...;o). Not sure if or how much I'll continue on this, but if I put more up...it'll turn out screwy...lol...that's a given, huh?

The first chapters and the last are the hardest for me. Currently working on editing the last chapter of my own novel, so I understand the hangups. :)

As for this one - quick and creepy, which fits the storyline well. Interesting premise and kind of scary when one thinks about how real it can be.

Thanks, JD. Maybe if I weren't such a liberal. I allow the story and characters to change the ending. They're bitchin' and moanin' and arguin' and it's costing me...ya know? LOL.

This story is so...ummm, different. I really struggled to put this little bit together. Thanks, again, for the thumbs up...;o)

Sick and Creepy...
ECK!

Wow pretty messed up so to speak. Willie's an ****. I don't care how much I drank the thought of shagging a dude never enters it. No joke. He should have just perused a sexy toy store, and bought a fake vagina or a Canteloups from Von's. Not that I tried either. Sick **** WWB, I was floored, but couldn't stop reading. One suggestion, the so to speak stuff was a tool obviously or I think anyways, but overused. Also, well two points. The abrupt fast forward to his wife dying of Aids was very harsh and could have been set up a little better in my opinion. It hit like a ton of bricks, but the again I'm sure that was the intention. This is some scary shiz

Hey, Baz..thanks for reading and the comments. A term I read here sometime back..."stream of consciousness" influenced this little burst of words. Totally off the top of my head, I often think of a phrase of expression and then extrapolate that into some really nasty things (like this or gory, grotesque, etc) and try to imagine what it would be like to actually see or live it...then, push it a teensy bit further. In this case, the phrase was "wild hair up his ****."

I probably won't finish this one. You're totally right in your critique, by the way...;o). I was going to use "so to speak" as kind of hook phrase (didn't work) and the abrupt fast forward to Willie's wife dying was intended to hit like a ton of bricks...;o).

Come to think of it...maybe I will do one more chapter just to further explore the sickness that occasionally (only occasionally, mind you) enters my mind....LOL.

okay buddy, first off your tags for this was funny! Interesting inspiration but it goes to show you to pay attention to life! LOL Secondly, your just flat out, no holds bar, GROSS. And I love ya for it WWB. You are single handly (and successfully, I might add) fueling my addition to taking sleeping pills from the effects of your's (and a few others) twisted stories here on SM. Congratulations my friend, you keep making me give my money over to Walgreens every time I sign into SM. I love when you push things a tinsy bit futher!

;o)...thanks for the great comments, dkk! You didn't know that I have 27.5% interest in Walgrens, I guess...huh? I'll keep writing the stuff that makes ya need sleeping pills...you keep gettin' 'em at WG, deal? LOL.

Aren't you supposed to be writing a chapter to Around the World?

yea, yea

I'll get there, and get this! I actually have an outline, (that's right, me, an outline?) for it already! Ta-duh!

AN OUTLINE!! OMG!!! LOL

The 'hit like a ton of bricks' comment was pretty damn correct WWB. Very good writing and storytelling with this one! Although I would have loved a little bit better set up it didn't give me pause at all. Willie is an ****, but it made you keep reading huh, Baz?

Hey, thanks, LadyLuck!! Didn't think I'd get anymore comments on this one...;o)

Younger sister follows bigger sister around alot. It used to really bug her! Probably still does (which is why I continue to do it) LOL

LOL...so, have you also been stayin' on her butt about the Around The World project? *crossing fingers*...

nah, her and authority and all. She'd just rebel if I bugged her, you know that! LOL, but she is doing it as far as I know!