Discussion of "Thou Shalt Not Kill - (4)" by writerwannabe
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Persephonie 4 months ago
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The meeting with Preston and Sanchez was a little strange. Do we have some sort of hypnotist priest here? If so, then why? If not, then what is the cross swinging thing about? Didn't give us any new info...just more questions. I think it would have been better if you had used a 1st pov and had Paige wake up startled, calling for her mom, rather than having Adara looking over her and giving us the whole REM sleep overview. I am bothered that Adara is so concerned for Paige that she just leaves her at home to go back to an empty office....especially when she could have made the same calls from home. As for getting the dreams ahead of time, it's nothing new. Adara has always had dreams before the fact...that's why she is so frustrated at not being able to help anyone intime. I liked the 2 murder premonitions....2 for the price of 1!!! However, I am confused as to why 2 priests are the killers...hmmmmmm...1.0 |
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