Discussion of "The Adventures of Lil' **** and Me, Doctor Michael Gavin" by writerwannabe

Great dialogue, WW...both inside and outside of the good doc's head.

Thanks, al....so, you didn't like the story? lol

Wow, my little Miss Rory Morrigan has gone AWOL, replaced by this creature! I read the draft you did awhile back when you were going to branch off mine, but you twisted it drastically. I liked the story WWB, I'm just a bit sad over by character turning out this way. Although LOL, I would have you know I stoped posting the story on SM but still continued it. I'm 10,000 words in and I am thinking that I really should add a succubus, if you wouldn't mind? ;)

Mind? Hey, I stole her from you, guess you can steal her back...lol. Yeah, I was reading over that non-posted mash I did on your story and thought that it would be a waste not to do something with it. Probably should have asked you first, but I only "stole" that fabulous name...;o). You wanna "steal" the succubus....have at it!! PS...I'd love to see where you've gone with that story, too...;o)

It really is such a cool name huh? And I don't know, maybe I'll post more of it sometime or another. Didn't think anyone was really interested in it. We are just a regular bunch of theifs cause I'm definetaly going to steal the succubus idea! LOL

Well done, WWB! Really well written. As with all your work, it leaves the reader wanting more.

:D

Great starter and this new Rory Morrigan is something else! I liked the play on play with the inner and outer dialogue, thats tends to be rather hard to do with most writers. Good job WWB!

Thanks, JD and dkk! ;o)

I enjoyed this a lot. I can relate to Gavin a lot. Calm and collected on the outside with a lil perverted **** in the inside. Lol. Great job, excellent dialogue as the others stated and interesting story. Do look forward to more

I"m so glad to be reading you again, WWB. You do know how to keep a reader interested in your storyline.

Thanks, DJ...;o)

I've missed you lately...let me run over and see if you've posted a new piece!

I haven't. I've been working on my website. I need to do more writing, starting today...

Didja hear my Yeehaw? LOL

A lil off the topic here: does the name "Gavin" has anything to do with Calvin? (as in Calvin and Hobbes) :)

LOL...you are definitely an "outside of the box" kind of thinker, DLM...;o)