Discussion of "Teleported 2" by writerwannabe

Wow! This is cool, Dr. Who meets Jumper meets a good guy. This guy is willing to tackle a Nazi to get his job's money back, which makes him cool, but the fact that he's just now learning how to do this transporting thing adds a whole new twist to the story. Keep going you two!

LOL...thanks, lauren! It's up to Jacko to continue and I haven't seen him around for over a week.

Wanna take a shot at it? ;o)

If your buddy doesn't post something by Friday then sure. Give the man time to create, ww. :-)

Great continuation!!! Bet this story was fun to mash! A nice read - am looking forward to finding out more :-)

I have to agree with Alsoran, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Thanks, alsoran and Lilithia! Don't know if Jacko is going to come back in. If not, laurendobbs might...or heck, either of you may, as well....;o)

I want to stay in it so whoever writes the next chapter, I'll be back for the following.

Sorry I've been AWOL. Work got a hold of me :(

This was a great Mash WWB. You have done it great justice. Thanks much. I'll continue after the next chapter, if I may. Anyway, I like how you flushed out Jackson a little more, gave his personality a little more body. Well done.

wow great continuation WWB! I cant wait to see what comes next!

Great job WWB! The only part that threw me a bit: I felt in the first chapter that he was somewhat older. In this one, he comes back to his parents house? Typically teenagers don't make bank runs for their businesses, or atleast I didn't at that age. LOL But oh what the hell, that's why the call it fiction, huh?

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Awesome mash Writer! You have a certain knack for this style of writing. I'm on to the next.....