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Discussion of "Love and Bones, 3" by writerwannabe


1 honeygloom 2 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Ah... clever;) I never thought of that!


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1 theblackhand 2 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Short...but good and gives new life to the story.


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1 Jackoalltrades 2 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Actually giving life to the Fairy bones. I like it. Was personally staying away from that particular plot possibility to try something new, but yours worked it, short and sweet.


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2 writerwannabe 2 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Funny how ideas occur, isn't it? This just "hit me" and I figured I'd bang it out before it got away, even though I knew it would be a shorty.;o)


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1 Jackoalltrades 2 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

That's the way to do it.


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1 chloe 2 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Oooh, I like it, very magical and metaphorical. I had already mashed a chapter 3 or I would have continued yours. I should have checked first.
Chloe


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1 Cheeseliker 2 months, 1 week ago Reply

Heh, interesting path you took, I thought somebody might go with this. A little too short I thought, needs more substance to be a strong chapter.

P.s. I am currently working on a new chapter for the Running-Taken-Taken:Discovery storyline I started and you continued, I hope you check it out when I've published the next chapter.


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1 cnd140 1 month, 2 weeks ago Reply

I liked her coming back to life, but the wishes thing was just to Pat, and done. I think if you took more time, and added your usual panache it would be much better!!


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