Discussion of "Feasting From Afar (2)" by writerwannabe

Holy ****!!!! Welcome aboard... that... was... AWESOME! 5Stars, definitely...

The feasting moved a whole lot closer. LOL Esophagus of Gerrymander sure beats bar nuts and pickled pigs feet. Great job and now I'm up without a clue. Tanks!

Thanks, guys! Should I continue to write in Elevator_Music's place or was this a one time shot until he can get back into the swing of things? Either way's good for me. I admit I really enjoyed having a shot in here, though...lol

I would say that until further notice, consider yourself his replacement because he hasn't even signed on... and I'm itchin to write my next chapter, but have to wait on him...lol...

Spectacular. I love spurting blood right before bedtime:) Nice work!

LOL...good thing you waited until after supper at least, honeyG. Thanks!

OK..per psycho, I'll continue to write in EM's place. Of course, when (if) he comes back, I'll hand over the reigns if he wants them back...grudgingly, but I'll do it...lol

Wow - wasn't expecting that turn to the story! Cool continuation, WW, and we've got ourselves a creature feature on our hands!

WOW!!Freaking WOW!! You never fail to deliver WWB! 5!

Thanks, blackhand...I was wondering if you'd ever get around to reading this one. I was especially interested in your comment because of your expertise in the horrific!

Whooaa, dude this one was better than the other one...ahaha.

Hey WWB~ Can’t believe I missed one of your chapters. This OC MASH was hard to keep up with all storylines.
Anyway, On its own, I thought your chapter rocked. You did a great job fleshing out the scene. I was on the edge of my seat relishing in the gore. I love gore. (not Al) I did find it was hard to imagine Peters character just sitting there watching the action go down…and not attacking to try and save Gareth, or turning and running top speed for the door. However who can ever predict what someone would do in such a situation. I like to think I would attack and fight for my friend, but in reality I’d probably wet myself and curl up in a fetal position. I also found his reaction and response to the sudden darkness and the question posed to be slightly anticlimactic. The previous chapter had such an emotionally chilling feel to it. It was downright creepy. It laid out a frightening scene and ended with a bang. Granted it was only chapter two for you, (actually three if we include the original), but still…I felt like as a reader I was slightly short changed. Instead of keeping pace with the emotion, you went the low budget slasher gore route. Which like I said, is great on its own! It’s not as if I didn’t enjoy it because I totally did. It just didn’t necessarily work for me as a follow to the first.
Voted a four.