Discussion of "Once Bitten, Must Die - 2" by writerwannabe

Very nice writerwannabe. I like that backstory, its dynamic. Seems a perfect setting, for a tale of many vampire slayings a-foot. Buffy eat ya heart out. Nicely written, that scenario provides great motive for ultimate retribution.

May have to start thinking about Chapter 3 :)

Thanks, CS! Hope you don't mind the shortened name, feel free to call me WWB - most everyone else does...;o).

"May have to start thinking about Chapter 3"...man, you can't leave me hanging now...lol.

I agree....Buffy is old hat...lol

Chapter 3 is on the way, you've got me thinking now, watch this space :)

I like the way you took it WWB, by the way does that bother you that we all shorten your name? I never thought to ask... Anyways, great job weaving the backstory with the dreams, very creative. And to add rape in there gives a whole new level of evil to vamps. Very cool. Now I must continue to read creativesoul's part 3. I'm hooked!

Thanks, dkk...;o)....nope, doesn't bother me at all that everyone shortens my name...nary a bit...lol

Hey WWB, just wanted to pop in on your latest and let you know someone mashed your Adventures of Lil' **** and me! Odd how it feels good to be mashed on SM but in the real world it just plain sucks huh? LOL ;)

It's so true about the lack of mashing. You guys keep up the good work and I'll try to catch up.

Great mash, WW. Excellent descriptive action with no wasted verbiage.

Muchas gracias, al. I hope to see some of your mashing. Lately, you've been in the poetry groove...;o)

Thanks, for the heads up, dkk. I read the mash Amythest-Eyes did and it's GREAT! ;o).

I've never been mashed in the real world...am I missing something? lol

replying to the wrong sis, WWB! LOL It's not enough that she's five minutes older, she gets responded to from my comments? Sheesh! ;)

Oh, no!! LOL....so, sorry, Lady...*blush*

I forgave all of the brutish behavior the minute I realized that they were vampires. Ah! That explains everything! And vampires that rape? This is a new perspective.... meaning, criminal vampires. Write on! I'd like to learn what happens next.

LOL...thanks, Hadley! Yup, criminal, perverted and I'm thinking there's more to come...;o)

suck on this Twilight! XD
I love how you took the story to a new level with this background, it fits seamlessly.

I'm gonna read the other chapters now :)

LOL...thanks, theSleepingTeabag and welcome to SM. I look forward to reading your work here.

wow I don't know if you meant this but it already has a creepy feel to it.