Discussion of "Notes from a Shifter - 4" by writerwannabe

Man do I ever want to know what direction you are taking this.....grrr. LOL But remember the first chapter, I caught what might have been some clues, she states in the first one that's it's not like some crapy sci-fi time-travel (in her words) she can't travel to another time or deminsion, just another place on earth in time. Anyways, I think that it's so funny the word 'whatnot' is still making an appearance! And I'm glad the term 'shifting' was brought back around. Great job at moving it forward WWB, and (just picking on you) it had alot of 'tell', more than 'show'. LOL But it rounded back around to the tone I had in the beginning. This story seems to be making a pretty cool circle of pacing and tone. I like it. Well done my friend.

By the way, I was real giddy about the description of the cowboy! LOL

Thanks, dkk..;o)

I wish I'd have left out the shifting that indicated a sci-fi theme. But, the fact that it's in doesn't really mean much. It was just conjecturing - it doesn't have to go in any of those directions.

I've always thought that dialogue was "show" rather than tell, but it's really the reader that decides that, I guess...;o)

Yessum, that cowboy was especially for all the Texas folks around here...lol. Hmmm, truthfully, I had a picture of an evil "Roland" from Stephen King's Dark Tower series in my mind...lol.