Discussion of "God Takes A Detour" by writerwannabe

This is definitely tying the previous chapters together. I have to say that I'm surprised at the way this story is going...but I'm addicted to it and can't wait to read the next chapter.

Thank you, very much, Katrina...;o).

As dog mentioned in one of his comments, paraphrasing, "I'm not sure you two have a handle on this". I don't think either honey or I did!

I hope the handle I forged is not too slippery..;o)

The handle, I have found, is made of solid wood. Sturdy, newly carved and doesn't squek at all when I turned it! This completely creeped me out, well done!

That's a great comment, LadyL...thank you, very much! ;o)

Talk about ramping it up:) Well played WWB!Not all what I expected, but that's the fun of SM, the writing on your toes requirement. I might need a few days to work out my next move, it turns out morning sickness is just a cruel euphemism for 24/7 sickness so I'm not much in the writing mood at the moment.

yeah, morning sickness is a lie! It's actually morning, noon, and night sickness!

Thanks, honey! Morning sickness? *scratching head*...OH!!!

Are congratulations in order? ;o)

Wow, took me a while to get here, then I stayed for a bit and ended up wanting to run away, far, far away. Great job tying stuff together but at the same time, allowing the characters to stay a drift in their own little sea of madness.

HOLD THE PRESS! Honey is pregnant?!?!?!

LOL...thanks, dkk...glad you liked it...;o)

Great mash!.. Not enough real mashing going on, but this is top notch stuff. I'll bet you have a God story that could stand alone as a new chapter. As it was, it took me awhile to find this gem. Good job, WW. Hope yer enjoying the new year.

Indeed, and a happy new year to you, as well, al..;o)

Funny how this one got started but it seems to have taken on a life of its own...lol.

Hey WWB, voted a while back but was too excited by the story to comment at the time. SO I was really ‘in like’ with this storyline up until this chapter, and then I fell ‘in love’ with it. Perfect continuation. Excellent writing, as always.
Speaking of which, I have to point out the opening of this chapter because I absolutely love it. I read it several times consecutively before I continued on with the rest. Obviously every good tale must have a solid plot, but for me, it’s the little bits like this that are the difference between a good story and a great one.

Thanks, dog. For me, your comments are often like little nuggets of gold sifted from a rushing stream of words. It might amaze you to learn that these nuggets (also provided by a handful of other writer's here) have greatly influenced my learning process and, for that, I am eternally grateful...;o).