Discussion of "Camp Victory? - For Whom?" by writerwannabe

Fantastic addition, WWB - Thanks so much for jumping back in! I really love how everyone has maintained the terse, snapshot style of writing, with only subtle hints about what's going on, who's committed the deed, and how everything is fitting together. Well played!

Thanks, Aggie! This one was really hard for me to get my head around...lol.

Wow!
Mutt is back in the game somehow, and the assassin is a woman!
I'm glad you put your two cents back in this project. Well done!

Damn! I went back to find out why you commented on Mutt being back in the game. How did I miss his getting arrested? Well, I guess I can cop a plea that his "arrest" was somewhat ambiguous? No? Well, hmmmm....hopefully, the talented writer's that follow can fix it....;o)

No problem with how jumping this style of writing is. It is easy to force the reader to fill in some gaps.
Besides, at this attrition rate, we almost had to bring him back:)

Thanks, WBS...;o)!

Maybe the assassin's not a woman?!? lol.

And remember the chalice with the palace has the pellet with the poison. The flagon with the dragon has the brew which is true.

LOL!!

ahhh....damnit! The chalice? Gesh! Guess I'll have to pull out some secret societies thought long gone or something, almost wish I had the bathtub...but this could get interesting... *insert evil laugh*

It almost felt like the characters were starting to fall stagnant... I can't put my finger on it exactly to say what was different about this chapter from all the rest. I like the direction, but some of the "personality" was missing.