Discussion of "Teleporter 10: Counter Attack" by writerwannabe

*gape* I think I love you for how you went with this. Getting into my raison d'etre in writing haha

Absolutely loved this chapter. Simple, easy, I like how you developed the camaraderie between Angelika and Jackson. And now I get to run with the blue-eyed cyclops.

I admit to have been a little...umm, worried that you might think that plot twist a little too far out. Really, really glad that you like it and I know you're up for it....;o)

I certainly won't presume to prescribe where you should go with this but...in my own mind I was heading toward the theory of parallel universes...lol.

Hmm parallel universes...I think I can work with that. Yes indeed I do.

You have posed quite the challenge for me my friend. Not sure when I'll be able to get to it as papers have piled up that need writing, so it might not be for a week or so. I'll shoot for this weekend though.

The ten foot cyclops suit dummy is a very nice twist.

Now there's an interesting concept to start the next chapter! ;o) Thanks, mjm!

You know guys, I haven't read any of the series, and now I kinda have to! You two are too funny and I'd love to see what y'all have created. I read this one, besides being 10 into it and way behind) it was really good. I love a good cyclops as much as the next girl. So, yeah, I've got to go back and start at 1. Ugh! These series on SM are killin' me! (HAha@me, I've got one of those series, duh!)

Okay, I read them all. Fast reader. I'm still interested, highly in fact, so who's next? LOL

Thanks, dkk....wow, you really went back and read them all? Now, that's a compliment...;o)

Jackoalltrades is up next! I'm really curious where he's going to go with cyclops....lol.

Wow, now the pressure is on. I must create a cyclops worthy of the ages! It will be tall, cunning, but unfortunately lacking in depth perception.

LMAO....depth perception! Only you would realize that fine point, Jack!!

Or...you could go with mjm hint: It's some kind of dummy or scarecrow.

Or...naw, no more help...you'll come up with something great, I'm sure of that! ;o)

I meant "suit dummy" as a corporate-spaz type, not a scare crow, but I could see where you got confused-- both have the same amount of personality and intelligence...

Ahh...lol...it's my age ya know?

Writer, dear, you are so like me! This sounds like something I would have written, LOL. Perhaps that is why we are always following each other, huh? Couple of mutual stalkers, hee hee! =)

I'm not complaining though, not with such lovely company! Cool addition, and now, like dkk, I must go to the beginning and see what I've been missing.

Okay, so I've read up and enjoyed thoroughly every piece. However, two things are seriously bugging me....

One: Why did Seth need the money? Where do the Nazi's play into this? That's who he gave it to right?

Two: Who is winning the Cliffhanger Challenge now?

This is one that I would love to mash, but won't, because I don't think I could do it justice.

I'm really honored that you went back and read all the previous chapters...;o). That I'm equally honored by your praise goes without saying, too.

I'm not sure that the reason for Seth needing the money or how the Nazi's played into the story will ever come out fully. Seth's character needs a lot of filling out in the next chapters. The Nazi's was, I think, simply to illustrate that "teleporting" was not confined to space, but also time.

Who's winning the Cliffhanger Challenge? LOL..I reckon it's a straight up draw!

You're modesty is becoming, but you are certainly up to the task of mashing this series! No doubt in my mind about that...;o). Jackoalltrades is a college student and is often away from the site. I'm sure he wouldn't mind if you jumped into the mix. I certainly wouldn't!

I should really proof before posting...not after, geesh! "The Nazi's was..." should be "The Nazi's were.." "You're modesty..." should be "Your modesty..." Are there any more....lol ?

LOL. None that I saw dear.

I do so apologize for my haphazard additions. This is finals week but after I will be able to devote time to my true calling...showing up WWB ;)

And Rico, have at it. Let's see what you can do. We'll just add you onto my score :P

LOL...rah - rah, go Jacko! I love competition and can't wait for you to get back to it...;o)

My latest is up.