Discussion of "After Murder" by writerwannabe
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alharris 1 year, 8 months ago
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You got me. Even with the 'either hole' comment I didn't have a clue that I was off track. The way you introduced Lisa was the perfect misdirection. |
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writerwannabe 1 year, 8 months ago
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:o)...make that a BIG SMILE. Thanks, al! |
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creativesoul 1 year, 8 months ago
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Wow, that was fascinating WWB. Really nice composition there. I read start to finish without blinking. The descriptiveness grabbed me immediately. The last 2 paragraphs I think I had to read twice to make sure, I'd read what I had! Nice one. |
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writerwannabe 1 year, 8 months ago
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Thanks, CS...;o). I hope you'll read the second chapter and let me know what you think. |
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justhoff 1 year, 8 months ago
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A point-of-view trip worth taking. |
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writerwannabe 1 year, 7 months ago
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Thanks, Justhoff! ;o) |
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djinndarme 1 year, 8 months ago
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You know how to start a story, WWB. The voice was sharp and acidic and just right. |
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writerwannabe 1 year, 7 months ago
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Thanks, DJ...very much..;o) |
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dkk4510 1 year, 7 months ago
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All praise be to thy greatest master of visualization: writerwannabe! |
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writerwannabe 1 year, 7 months ago
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Hey, dkk...missed ya around here and not just your compliments....lol. Thanks! |
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dkk4510 1 year, 7 months ago
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It just wouldn't be the same without me, huh? :) |
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writerwannabe 1 year, 7 months ago
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No, ma'am, it wouldn't.;o) |
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marcusgregory 1 year, 6 months ago
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Very nice WWB. You know I love first person narrative myself and this was great. I also love, love, love the twist ending that makes me have to reread just to make sure I got it right the first time. |
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cjbishop08 1 year, 6 months ago
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I've missed your work, wwb. Great stuff, as usual! Really liked how Jeremy ended up being his lover and not Lisa's boyfriend like I was thinking at first. Gonna read the second part now :) |
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