Discussion of "Aufwiedersehen" by writerwannabe

Oh, wow. I thought it was going to be like a Interview of the Paranoid...but the last tiny bit blew that idea out of the water. I like you style and pacing. Very effective and the cliff hanger had be cringing! I thought the scene where he was leaving the message and his wife running to the phone was excellently written. You've got me hooked, my fellow Texan. LOL

LOL!
I just inspired myself - Interview with the Paranoid! Hahaha!

LOL...thanks, dkk! I'll be looking for "Interview with the Paranoid"...:o)

Hook 'Em Horns!! I'm from Austin. You?

Leander and BOOOO Horns! *sheepishly bowing my head* Aggie, sorry... ;)

LMAO....dang! Don't worry, though, there's help for you out there....uh, somewhere....;o)

This was beautiful, Wwb. I loved the ending when she raced to the phone. That in and of itself showed how deep the relationship between husband and wife went. Wow.

Thanks, JD...;o). I hope you'll continue to read this series. You're comments are particularly nice to receive.

*Blushes* Aww gee... thanks. I love reading your work. I never know what to expect from you, Wwb, except exceptional writing. :D

My turn to blush...lol. Thanks, JD. Mutual respect and admiration are the best, don't ya know! ;o)

Whoa, wonderfully written. I loved the use of the German language, I'm Cajun myself and I find myself using French/Canjun words from time to time.

Hey, Amethyst-Eyes, thanks for reading and the comments!

Oh, and welcome back..lol. When are you going to publish something new? ;o)

I enjoyed reading this, it has good explanation and a good twist to it. However you repeated "a nook, a cranny" several times in the story. I don't know if you meant to do it but it got a bit repetetive. However it was good to read :)