Discussion of "The Adventures of Lil' **** and Me, Doctor Michael Gavin - 3" by writerwannabe

WW, your word-smithing and storytelling is second to none here. Bravo for moving in a unique direction of erotica/sci-fi/psychological/Law & Orderesque genre. In addition I have two comments:

1) Give me back the freaking paragrapgh breaks in chap 1.

2) FYI...that putty in her hands stuff can be treated medically.

LOL..thanks, al! "Law & Orderesque"? Cool.

Observation of an event, changes the sequence and therefore, the outcome. I think that's what happened to the paragraph breaks. I know, it hurts my eyes, too...;o).

After writing "putty in her hands" I thought, oh, crap what a lousy cliché. Then, I left it in, posted, re-read and thought, "Ah, shucks, I left that lousy cliché in there!" lol

GO LIL' ****! That's all I got to say about that.... ;)

That'll work just fine, Lady...just fine...;o) Thank you!

LMAO!

These three chapters have been simply amazing, wwb. Captivating and intriguing. And this latest chapter was the best yet, imo.
I thought that he would've prevented it from escalating that far along into seduction, but great twist on it. I thought Gavin was a goner for sure. Can't wait for the next entry!

Wow! Thanks, CJ!

Looks like I succeeded in presenting the unexpected...;o). I really intended this to be the final chapter. On second look, there could easily be another but, not from me. I'd welcome your mash...;o)

sorry WWB, I swear I've been following along, but I also am almost done with around the world, so....ditto everything my sis said and what CJ said. Honestly, could I really say anything else that hasn't already been said? You know it was good! LOL

I loved it all!

Fabulous "ending", WWB.