writerwannabe |
Date Joined: March 3, 2008
Last Login: Oct. 2, 2012 |
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Born Texan, lived most of my life in Germany. Love to write and hope to make it a new profession rather than the current hobby..;o)
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3134 Comments by writerwannabe
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writerwannabe 7 months, 2 weeks ago
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MrLightning...great 'seeing' you here again. Yeah, I drop in occasionally, but it's not the same anymore. |
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writerwannabe 8 months ago
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Ah...better...;o). Still a lot of tell, little show and in this chapter a couple of dropped words really affected how I read it. |
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writerwannabe 8 months ago
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Sorry...no clue where this connects to first chapter and not enough to make me want to know...;o( |
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writerwannabe 8 months ago
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I like the premise, but think there's far too much 'tell' and not nearly enough 'show'. |
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writerwannabe 8 months ago
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OK...OK, I've gotten your point..;o) |
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writerwannabe 8 months ago
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Welcome to SM, WillowCreek! ;o) |
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writerwannabe 8 months ago
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The idea of identifying a personal hero is to write about someone that almost everyone can identify with - good or bad. |
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writerwannabe 8 months ago
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Hi Kirsten and Welcome to SM! ;o). |
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writerwannabe 8 months ago
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Hi rico - doing well...very well, in fact...;o). The first book is published in both English and German, and the second is very close to being done! |
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writerwannabe 8 months ago
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In following the exemplary example set by Nashvillebecker in his promise to write one chapter per month for the remainder of 2012 (a promise I've echoed); I've kicked off series titled "Who's Your Hero". I've got the first 'chapter' posted...who's next? Who will tell us who their hero(es) is and why? |
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170 Chapters by writerwannabe
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4.4/5.0 - published Sep 21, 2012 - 24 comments (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Aug 05, 2012 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Aug 05, 2012 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Jul 17, 2012 - 11 comments (preview)
Working my way out of a case of writer's block.
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4.5/5.0 - published Jan 25, 2012 - 12 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Jun 22, 2011 - 19 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Jun 22, 2011 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Jun 22, 2011 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published Jun 22, 2011 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Jun 22, 2011 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Jun 22, 2011 - 4 comments (preview)
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3.6/5.0 - published Jun 10, 2011 - 15 comments (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Apr 18, 2011 - 9 comments (preview)
New story. Beginning of duel with MrLightening.
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4.3/5.0 - published Apr 13, 2011 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Apr 03, 2011 - 20 comments (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Oct 25, 2010 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 04, 2010 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Sep 07, 2010 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.4/5.0 - published Aug 15, 2010 - 20 comments - start of story (preview)
Long back story addition to the Jewel Guardians story.
Tags: fantasy |
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4.6/5.0 - published Jul 10, 2010 - 14 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Jul 02, 2010 - 9 comments (preview)
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3.7/5.0 - published Jun 08, 2010 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
Chapter 6 to creativesoul's vampire story.
Tags: horror |
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 07, 2010 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
After death experience, chapter two
Tags: fantasy |
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4.2/5.0 - published Jun 06, 2010 - 14 comments (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published May 19, 2010 - 16 comments - start of story (preview)
Mash, Chapter two to Once Bitten, Must Die
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4.2/5.0 - published May 17, 2010 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published May 13, 2010 - 15 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published May 11, 2010 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published May 10, 2010 - 13 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published May 07, 2010 - 15 comments (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Apr 08, 2010 - 18 comments (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published Apr 06, 2010 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
Project "Around the World" Chapter 5
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4.2/5.0 - published Jan 19, 2010 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.6/5.0 - published Jan 11, 2010 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Dec 30, 2009 - 13 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Dec 10, 2009 - 27 comments (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Dec 09, 2009 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Dec 08, 2009 - 41 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Dec 01, 2009 - 20 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.0/5.0 - published Dec 01, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 26, 2009 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 25, 2009 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.0/5.0 - published Dec 02, 2009 - 18 comments - start of story (preview)
Chapter two to Dark Secret
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4.2/5.0 - published Nov 24, 2009 - 8 comments (preview)
Exploring a subject I've lately become fascinated with, the power of mind over matter.
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 19, 2009 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.4/5.0 - published Nov 16, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Continuation of Vampires by:
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3.7/5.0 - published Nov 13, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
Second chapter to Smitty.
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4.1/5.0 - published Nov 10, 2009 - 13 comments (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 05, 2009 - 15 comments - start of story (preview)
The Nightstalker admits that a voice in his head has been guiding his actions. He sees another waiter, working where Edward used to work...clue number two.
Tags: anger, criminality, drama, fighting |
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4.1/5.0 - published Oct 30, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
Off the cuff...shooting straight...lol
Tags: mash |
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3.5/5.0 - published Oct 30, 2009 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
Bang...another off the cuff...;o)
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4.0/5.0 - published Oct 29, 2009 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
Wrote this on the fly...straight into the SM story box. No review, no proofreading...just bang! Hope there aren't too many errors...lol
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4.5/5.0 - published Aug 25, 2009 - 20 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Aug 24, 2009 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Aug 23, 2009 - 6 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Aug 14, 2009 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Aug 11, 2009 - 23 comments (preview)
A biker falls in love with a very religious girl and in order to date her, has to attend her church. He's in for a big surprise...
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4.2/5.0 - published Jul 31, 2009 - 10 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.8/5.0 - published Jun 09, 2009 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published May 18, 2009 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.6/5.0 - published Apr 30, 2009 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.8/5.0 - published Apr 29, 2009 - 11 comments - start of story (preview)
Quickie entry...ten minutes flat...and ran out of time...;o(
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4.5/5.0 - published Apr 20, 2009 - 39 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Mar 30, 2009 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.6/5.0 - published Mar 25, 2009 - 21 comments - start of story (preview)
The conclusion of the Penny Dreadful - Crime Thriller - project.
Tags: blood, gore, penny-dreadful-project-crime, thriller, violence |
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4.3/5.0 - published Mar 12, 2009 - 13 comments (preview)
This is the fourth "piece" of the One Day in a Life storyline. Not necessarily the fourth chapter...just another piece of the puzzle.
Tags: drama, fortune-telling |
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4.0/5.0 - published Mar 09, 2009 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Mar 05, 2009 - 9 comments - start of story (preview)
Not as much action in this second chapter, but I hope it tells the story as well as the first chapter.
Tags: war |
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4.3/5.0 - published Mar 03, 2009 - 22 comments (preview)
Draft chapter of a bigger story I'm working on...looking for constructive criticism.
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4.0/5.0 - published Dec 30, 2008 - 21 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.0/5.0 - published Dec 29, 2008 - 25 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.5/5.0 - published Dec 15, 2008 - 5 comments (preview)
I've a mind to take this supernatural, but there are other possibilities.
Tags: lifeand-death, teenagers |
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3.9/5.0 - published Dec 11, 2008 - 13 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.6/5.0 - published Nov 25, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.2/5.0 - published Nov 21, 2008 - 23 comments - start of story (preview)
My intent was to lead this story away from the supernatural. It could still work that way, but I think I've failed...lol
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3.6/5.0 - published Nov 19, 2008 - 1 comment (preview)
I know, I know...mash chapters should be linked to the previous chapter BUT: Had I done that, no one would see it because the start chapter was written over 4 months ago...lol. So, if you want to read chapter one, simply go to my profile and pull i
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3.9/5.0 - published Nov 17, 2008 - 6 comments (preview)
I haven't a clue where this is going. In the lull of the contest and other projects currently in a flaut; the child's bedtime prayer jumped into my head and I quickly put fingers to keyboard. I have no thoughts of continuing but, if you've a mind..
Tags: feels, good...lol, whatever |
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4.0/5.0 - published Nov 07, 2008 - 15 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.8/5.0 - published Oct 28, 2008 - 6 comments (preview)
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3.6/5.0 - published Oct 21, 2008 - 4 comments (preview)
Thought I'd expand upon the song lyrics and write a story. Although I intend to follow the lyrics, you are certainly welcome to mash and take it anywhere you'd like....;o)
Tags: action-romance, adult |
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3.7/5.0 - published Oct 20, 2008 - 1 comment (preview)
Another song lyric. I've appreciated all the comments on previous lyrics postings....;o)
Tags: poetry, song-lyric |
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3.7/5.0 - published Oct 01, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)
Part Two.. It's actually one complete story split in two because of word/space limits. You guys know the drill....lol. And finally, I screwed around with getting this thing formatted too long. It wasn't fun anymore. So, it's posted as is.
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3.8/5.0 - published Sep 30, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)
This is the final version that I submitted for the Horror Anthology Contest (Project). I've already received a rejection letter....not scary enough. I'll buy that.
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4.3/5.0 - published Sep 27, 2008 - 9 comments (preview)
Here's a song lyric for all of my Texas countrymen and women here on SM....;o)
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3.5/5.0 - published Sep 26, 2008 - 6 comments (preview)
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4.1/5.0 - published Sep 26, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Sep 11, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story
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3.6/5.0 - published Aug 22, 2008 - 6 comments (preview)
Probably an exercise in clarity that only I need, but I was bitten by a "good deed" bug this morning and thought I might relieve the itch this way!
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3.7/5.0 - published Aug 05, 2008 - 23 comments - start of story
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2.7/5.0 - published Aug 04, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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-- /5.0 - created on Aug 04, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Jul 30, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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3.1/5.0 - published Jul 30, 2008 - 1 comment (preview)
This is one of my entries for the Anthology project. I've revised it and probably will again. Appreciate your comments. Thanks.
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4.5/5.0 - published Jul 29, 2008 - 9 comments (preview)
Well, I goofed and waited too long to publish this in the contest. So, here it is as a new story. I'd appreciate any and all comments/critique. Thanks.
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2.9/5.0 - published Jul 28, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Jul 24, 2008 - 6 comments
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3.4/5.0 - published Jul 21, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 15, 2008 - 11 comments - start of story
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2.5/5.0 - published Jul 14, 2008 - 9 comments - start of story
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-- /5.0 - created on Jul 14, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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3.3/5.0 - published Jun 24, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Jun 23, 2008 - 10 comments (preview)
I wrote this story 25 years ago and thought I'd throw it out there. Naturally, this is only the first part of it and I stopped so that ya'll could mash the heck out of it.
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4.4/5.0 - published Jun 16, 2008 - 10 comments - start of story
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3.6/5.0 - published Jun 10, 2008 - 12 comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Jun 10, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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4.3/5.0 - published May 29, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published May 29, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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4.4/5.0 - published May 23, 2008 - 28 comments - start of story
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3.7/5.0 - published May 18, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published May 16, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published May 08, 2008 - 10 comments - start of story
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4.3/5.0 - published May 07, 2008 - 11 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 23, 2008 - 16 comments - start of story
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2.5/5.0 - published Jun 01, 2008 - 2 comments
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3.6/5.0 - published Apr 22, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Apr 21, 2008 - 3 comments
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2.7/5.0 - published Apr 21, 2008 - 9 comments
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 21, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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3.1/5.0 - published Apr 18, 2008 - no comments (preview)
I couldn't figure out how to get this final chapter read. It went in as a mash...on the contest pages (page 23 or something) and I figured no one would ever see it there. So, I posted it as a new story, too. If I done bad, I'm sorry...lol
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 18, 2008 - 12 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Apr 11, 2008 - 13 comments - start of story
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4.4/5.0 - published Apr 07, 2008 - 6 comments - start of story
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4.4/5.0 - published Apr 02, 2008 - 6 comments
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3.1/5.0 - published Apr 02, 2008 - 1 comment (preview)
Mashing "A Scorned Woman" and "The Mark" has developed into its' own story. Here's the continuation of the two under a new name.
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 02, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
I think I have(successfully) brought the two stories "The Mark" and "A Scorned Woman" together to the extent that they have become a single story. Mashing "A Scorned Woman v" and "The Mark - iv, here is that "new" story.
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-- /5.0 - created on Apr 02, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
I think I have(successfully) brought the two stories "The Mark" and "A Scorned Woman" together to an extent that they have become a single story. Mashing "A Scorned Woman v" and "The Mark - iv, here is that "new" story.
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3.9/5.0 - published Mar 30, 2008 - 6 comments
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3.4/5.0 - published Mar 30, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Mar 20, 2008 - 1 comment
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3.8/5.0 - published Mar 20, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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3.7/5.0 - published Mar 14, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Mar 14, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Mar 14, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Mar 13, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story
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4.0/5.0 - published Mar 13, 2008 - 6 comments
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3.8/5.0 - published Mar 13, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
I'll apologize from the get go to those who were expecting a detailed and bloody murder plot...lol. Likewise, I hope you liked the twist and are now hanging on the edge to see how the murder will happen!!
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3.4/5.0 - published Mar 11, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Mar 11, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Mar 07, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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2.9/5.0 - published Mar 06, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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3.5/5.0 - published Mar 06, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
I kept the original story through paragraph five in order to set the stage for my version of chapter 2. Hope you'll enjoy.
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4.5/5.0 - published Mar 04, 2008 - 12 comments (preview)
Jesus appears unannounced in an old German cathedral and his message is not what anyone would have expected.
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