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writerwannabe

Date Joined: March 3, 2008
Last Login: Jan. 26, 2012
Born Texan, lived most of my life in Germany. Love to write and hope to make it a new profession rather than the current hobby..;o)

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3 writerwannabe 2 days ago Context

Greetings Ancients! Seems I missed this boat, too; but I'm with beanpole on the next. Now, to read the first two chapters...;o)


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1 writerwannabe 2 days ago Context

Thanks, Cheese...the feeling is mutual. Great seeing you here again...;o)


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2 writerwannabe 2 days ago Context

Thanks, JD and great seeing you here (have I already mentioned that?)...lol.

You know me too well...including my faults. Someday...someday, I'll remember to pay more attention to POV's!

I take your critiques to heart and always appreciate them...;o)


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1 writerwannabe 2 days, 1 hour ago Context

Great seeing you again, here, my friend; and, I see you brought along your superb talent! I also agree with all previous comments...in particular Cheese's comment about the razor wraiths.

Long overdue the background for the title, perfectly executed. The Mollies...now there remains much to discover, too! ;o)


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3 writerwannabe 1 week ago Context

It's really great to see so many of the so-called "ancients" returning, even if it turns out to be only a cameo for some of us...we'll see.

Brilliant idea to break from Gail and bring in new characters here; and what a character Alex is...wow! Whatever sort of creature he turns out to be...he's bad, he's nasty and I love him!

Slick, too, how you tied him to Gail and the stranger...no, not any longer, now he's got a name - "It"...;o). Very well done, JD.


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3 writerwannabe 1 week ago Context

WooHooo! Good to see you here again, JD...;o). Now, let me go and see what brilliance you've brought back!


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1 writerwannabe 1 week, 1 day ago Context

It's certainly a challenge but you handle it very well. Now that you mention it, I do remember the gorilla character in one of those "intermissions" that I needed help understanding..lol.


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4 writerwannabe 1 week, 1 day ago Context

Welcome to SM, Pantha35.

Why don't you post your story here and give everyone an opportunity to see what you're talking about? ;o)


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1 writerwannabe 1 week, 1 day ago Context

Welcome to SM!

Certainly, as crystalfoo mentioned, this is one of the best new chapters I've read on SM since dropping back in, too...lol.

Very clean word flow, great opening in character development and a story that instantly dragged me in.

This is writing!


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2 writerwannabe 1 week, 2 days ago Context

Guess who's back and posted chapter 3 to 'The Pledge'. Nope not him...no, not her, either...come on, come on!

Okay, I'll tell you...REGZ! It's at

http://storymash.com/u/Regz/helukile/


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