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writerise	Real Name: Marcella Glenn Date Joined: June 25, 2008 Last Login: Sept. 21, 2008

28 Comments by writerise

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1		writerise 3 years, 4 months ago Context I wasn't sure what was going on. Let the characters tell the story.
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1		writerise 3 years, 5 months ago Context What do you think?
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1		writerise 3 years, 5 months ago Context What do you think?
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1		writerise 3 years, 5 months ago Context I enjoyed reading it. I liked the interchange of conversation.
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1		writerise 3 years, 6 months ago Context Thank you for the comment, DwayneHoover.
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1		writerise 3 years, 6 months ago Context Situations like that happen in life. I found it interesting, wanted more.
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1		writerise 3 years, 6 months ago Context Your description allowed me to be there, well done.
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1		writerise 3 years, 6 months ago Context I'd like you to comment on my poem, or take it in a new direction. Thank you.
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1		writerise 3 years, 6 months ago Context I liked the different viewpoints, interesting mix.
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1		writerise 3 years, 6 months ago Context Rigid33, this is the fifth installment of Followed. Did you read the others?
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15 Chapters by writerise

"Poetry" by writerise

3.5/5.0 - published Sep 01, 2008 - 4 comments

"Average Folks" by writerise

3.1/5.0 - published Jul 31, 2008 - 3 comments

"Poetry" by writerise

3.5/5.0 - published Jul 23, 2008 - 7 comments (preview)

One word can inspire you, lift your spirits, and console you.

"Followed" by writerise

2.8/5.0 - published Jul 25, 2008 - 2 comments

"Followed" by writerise

2.9/5.0 - published Jul 18, 2008 - no comments - start of story

"Followed" by writerise

2.9/5.0 - published Jul 17, 2008 - no comments - start of story

"Followed" by writerise

2.9/5.0 - published Jul 15, 2008 - no comments - start of story

"Followed" by writerise

2.9/5.0 - published Jul 13, 2008 - no comments - start of story

"Followed" by writerise

2.9/5.0 - published Jul 13, 2008 - no comments - start of story

"Continuing Sunday In The Park" by writerise

2.9/5.0 - published Jul 12, 2008 - no comments - start of story

"The House" by writerise

2.9/5.0 - published Jul 11, 2008 - 1 comment (preview)

"Don't!" Chuck shouted. Ya know the House is evil." "Just wanna see what's in that black box by the tree."

"Doomed" by writerise

2.5/5.0 - published Jul 10, 2008 - no comments (preview)

You want me to shoot the gun over his head?" "Yep."' "Why?" "He wants in, and that's the test."

"Followed" by writerise

2.5/5.0 - published Jul 08, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)

"Ever since I worked at the IRS weird stuff, like that, happens to me. Let's sit before we start to shop." "Don't know if ya noticed, but that man has been following us." Her eyes rolled to the left. "Don't look."

"In The Shadows" by writerise

3.4/5.0 - published Jul 06, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)

"Jackie, he's following me." I sighed. "He was at the market when I got there."

"Disappeared" by writerise

3.1/5.0 - published Jul 04, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)

A sudden pain punched me in the stomach. I struggled to breathe, leaned against the elevator. Slowly, I collected myself. I felt the same kind of ache before being told of grandmother's death.