So many avenues to take this. It got my brain humming with ideas. Great Job!

I wish more people would rate and ad comments on writing. I'd like to hear what someone liked in one of my pieces and what they didn't like or got lost when reading. This would help me to write more "likes" and less "help I'm lost".

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You got me wanting to read more.

It's like a teaser to a movie. Where will you go next? Will you explore the different tales that haunted us a children? Will one of these things in the night we were told come true and terrorize your main character and the people around them.
Can't wait to see what you do with this.

This is from the daily writing practice, which is supose to flow unedited. Give some of them a try and see what comes of it.

I know that some of the daily writing from "Just one line to start" isn't the best, but it's to keep the creative juice going, and to help prevent writers block. Give some of them a try, and see what flows unedited from you... Have fun.

I liked it. It speaks volumes

I liked where it was going, but somehow felt it was lacking something. I'm trying to figure out what it is. It felt like it dragged a little, but what to do to fix that escapes me right now.
Keep working, I'd like to see where you go with this, and how you keep the reader bouncing from real or a drug related trip. Over all a good job.

Yep, it's kind of bad, but so are some of mine on my site. So jump on over and take a look.