All Comments by whisper55

I like this needs some fixing, but story lines strong maybe need to fatten it up a bit if you was going to send it into a mag..

Would like to see the end myself.

I don't think the story could end any other way for the fight of good and evil must go on. Good job. Good luck.

A woman being raped is not counted as horror? I bet ya the woman that gets raped thinks of it as horror. Some of my greatest horror writers doesn't use monsters but use the human monster. I think this is what your aiming for. Good luck.

I like this too. But in the chapter before this it was mentioned the brothers but later said Billy Ray had no kin.

WOW, this is beautiful....I may write something to it but not as beautiful as you've made the start. I worked in a nursing home and death can be beautiful in it's on way.

Is it warm here....you know how to keep the tension going.

Hey I can't see how I could do better on this and you gave us all more to work with.

Hi actually writing it first by hand would help. I am terribly hillbilly and have a problem with grammar. I write how I speak.

I don't know this thing is also posing as human but you could be right.

Here's a sample of my art.

As I write and paint I am working on a book for 6-8 year olds called The Misadventures Of A Kentucky Squirrel. This is a true story of what happened when my dad packed home four baby squirrels. I intend to write and illustrate it both.

This leaves a lot of ends to tie together. I couldn't figure how to tie Methra in, now you've give me more to think on. I'll say one thing if we can tie all theends up in this story, we can pat ourselves on the back.

yes ...I think so...I dug it up...sometimes I say "When did I write this?" "Hey it ain't bad. Thanks.

Made me wanna cry.

I'd like away to add art work to my stories. Maybe if we have other artist we could do art for each other. I like fantasy erotic such as Vampires, were animals,Fairies and warriors.

Sorry You will find this on my profile posted twice. Its late here..I am sleepy, and thats my story and I am sticken to it.

I am Native American we have shadow walkers, ghost walkers and dream walkers, but haven't you ever dreamed you were doing something. She wasn't doing this for real, but only dreaming she was doing this, get it?

I still cannot see a clear shot of who is doing this. I love a story that I can't solve but I need some choices and a few misleads to go on. I can't fit Methra in to this and unless someone throws something really wild into the last chapter I don't see how it"s going to come together. It all has to tie together, thats what the end means. So you can't just throw a new killer in at the end and say heres the killer. If Methra is the killer something is going to have to tie the ends together. So I can't wait for the ending cause ever things is still so scatered, I want to see how it's pulled together. You wouldn't believe who I thought of for the killer. I even have a why. But I wanna see if anyone else uses it.

I know it's late for this but the other threads confused me.

Thank you for reading..I know that this was more cramped by what I was going to say. I never watched the movie, didn't watch any of the chain saw movies. They didn't click with me. I am glad you like some of my stuff. I am glad you aren't afraid to say what you think. This way I can improve my work.

This one has me on the edge of my seat. I like where all this is happening. I may write a part to it but it will take some thinking. Looking forward to seeing another chapter from you though.

I wrote a part too, for this but your wowed me. You got my vote.

Hi I found your story and am glad I did. It is so detailed and realistic in a fantasy way of course.

Elves are quite common place in my world. Don't just tell me what you think, show me what you mean, be my guest and write a chapter.

I loved this as I am part native american. will continue to reed yours.

Thank you. I lean towards the dark. I get a bit erotic too. Its funny how the not so bad words get blanked and some of the others slip through.

I like this, keep it going.

This was the way I thought it should go, but never thought of someone after his oh so secret work. Amazing.

I liked this....I think it needs a turn if not for the best...just a tweek, let me show you.