Discussion of "Who To Trust" by whisper55

I enjoyed the read, but thought it a bit similar to the new Texas Chainsaw Masacare flick. After reading some of your work, I am sure you can be more creative and unique than this. I look forward to reading the rest, and will keep an eye out for any new stories you write. Overall you did portray the emotions needed to keep a reader on the edge.

Thank you for reading..I know that this was more cramped by what I was going to say. I never watched the movie, didn't watch any of the chain saw movies. They didn't click with me. I am glad you like some of my stuff. I am glad you aren't afraid to say what you think. This way I can improve my work.

A good read.

Good thing those cops were undercover. I think it would have been good to have kept her abducted for a little longer to build some intrigue.