Discussion of "The Pandora Experiment" by wayn007
honeygloom 5 years, 1 month ago
Man, that was tense! You definitely have a talent for writing action. Everything flowed smoothly and I could picture everything clearly. Nice work!
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wayn007 5 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for the compliment! I can't wait to see where it goes from here!
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BoltNut 5 years, 1 month ago
Great job, Wayne. Everything flowed nicely, the mental images were good. You do seem to have a talent for action sequences. Good work. 5
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