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"A New Beginning"

The Repentance  by viniyo

The girl's eyes opened the next day and she found herself wrapped in white clothes in a bright room with all the people in white gazing at her. She thought that she had been dead and was about to be placed infront of God for jurisdiction.

Suddenly, Niet came in and she realized that she was not dead. Niet had brought her to the hospital the time she collapsed in the dirty streets. The poison has been removed and she was recovering now. Niet was here to enquire the doctor when to take her to the court for trial.

The kid hated Niet but she also felt a feeling of respect going through her when she heard the doctor say that it could have been late to save her if Niet would have not brought her in time she would have been dead by now.

She tried to call Niet when his meeting with the doctor was over. Niet came over her place at his own to inform her that she would be released from the hospital in the next two days and will be in prison after that. Suddenly the girl could not stop herself and burst out crying. She was in a deep repentance and Niet could see it; but there were no expresions on his face.

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Date created: Jan. 20, 2009
Date published: Jan. 20, 2009
Comments: 0
Tags: eyes, love, repent, sad, sorrow, tears
Word Count: 227
Times Read: 194
Story Length: 1