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The Time has come  by viniyo

The time has come when I can say that the best part of my life will be the day that I lived today. I reach the beach before time waiting for my puzzle and the one and only love of my life... Oliver. It's already quarter past seven...

I just took a beer and was sitting near the enterance to grab Oliver as soon as he comes in. But, alas the time passes away. I watch people singing, dancing, kissing each other. I feel jealous and this makes me more eager to meet Oliver.... Please come in Oliver...

Hey I see the watch and it's already nine at night... I feel like leaving the party; I could do nothing and had the same beer which I had taken in the begenning. And suddenly I see Oliver coming, the same shine in him.

He smiled and came and gave me a hug. This was the day I had been waiting for years. We moved in and I started gathering my strength to propose him. I asked him to accompany to a walk on the beach and here we go... watching the image of the moon trying to reach the sea and myself trying to reach the depths of Oliver's heart.

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Date created: Dec. 4, 2008
Date published: Dec. 4, 2008
Comments: 0
Tags: beach, beer, hug, love, night, party, walk
Word Count: 214
Times Read: 278
Story Length: 1