Discussion of "Stop Everything 2" by veraelaine
theblackhand 6 years, 6 months ago
I read your 1st chapter also...both are good chapters. If you are writing from a fictional point of view, using a harder substance like crack cocaine, heroin, etc would make your work more believable. I say that because marijuana is more of a gateway drug to those sort of problems that result in rehab.
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veraelaine 6 years, 6 months ago
Thank you theblackhand, glad you liked them. The story is fiction, but I am writing as the enabling wife of a recovering addict. I'm also 24 years clean and sober.
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