Discussion of "Baby Doll Babies" by veraelaine
Netnet 4 years ago
Creepy, wow good story.
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Cornelius 3 years ago
You have talent! The story is very creative, original and disturbing. It has a good pace and flow. But what really sticks with me in this one are your short, vivid character descriptions. In just one or two sentences you effectively convey the appearance and personality of your characters. Impressive. I enjoyed the touch of compassion from the arresting officer, where he sees no point upsetting the mentally ill woman by telling her the babies are dead. You are a good writer.
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