thank you...please feel free to add to it! I left it very open so it can take off in any direction

please keep it going.....!!!!!!!!!

Yes I am a newbie!! This site is awesome. I love the concept and the creativity of all the writers. I'm a college student majoring in business, but my passion is in the arts. I am left with the inner conflict of "do I pursue money or my passions??!!" Ugh decisions! ha.. Please leave comments, suggestions and criticisms of my work! I've read many of the stories on the site and am encouraged and inspired by everyone of you!

huh..I am surprised at the low rating! i feelit was beautifully written and gripped my attention the whole way...love it

ha thanks...it was a late night random thing so didn't really have the whole plot in mind..free flowin.

ahhh!! the agony of first love....i feel it...keep writing, but with this story -it can only continue as you continue to grow and find that what you are searching for is in yourself..if that makes any sense

i love it...