Discussion of "After the Bell Rings: Chapter 3" by tyzzler12
sk8erdude1 5 years, 9 months ago
nice story. it seemed real to me. i give you props
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livesideways22 5 years, 9 months ago
I like where you have gone with this. Theres a sense of wrong-that-just-feels-right in the way you portray John Abba and his internal debate with the young girl. Please keep it up, you got me hooked on this story.
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