Discussion of "The next morning" by tmason111
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theblackhand 1 year, 9 months ago
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A good start. Just watch your grammar and spelling. |
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tmason111 1 year, 8 months ago
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should i start the next chapter or revise to the i have |
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ladyvike15 1 year, 9 months ago
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i agree with blackhand, you have a great start here. you really need to focus on adding more detail to your work, and you'll do great! I like it a lot though. |
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tmason111 1 year, 8 months ago
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thanks i am still working on what kind of details to add |
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