Discussion of "Reborn in Sin (Chp.1)" by timiee

Your opening line 'Six years ago a devil took my soul' very good, it grabs and pulls you in, but most people are going to assume there is just 1 devil. Are you saying there are multiples and the Devil himself that took your soul. If so on the latter, than maybe try rephraising it," Six years ago, the Devil took my soul."

thank you for your comment but yes i did mean "a devil" for reasons that when i get around to finishing the second part you will understand why she thinks of this one person as a devil but i didnt mean that she was talking about the devil himself