Discussion of "This is how the world ends" by thor23

So this welder is gonna destroy the world?

You created a great character. I understand him based on the excellent descriptions of his morning. You left it extremely mashable. Good job.

I added another chapter. I'd like to go back and forth if you want. I'll write the good guy, you write the bad guy. And I understand if you're writing just for fun, but proofreading definitely helps. I'm pretty shitty at it myself.