thor23 |
Date Joined: Aug. 2, 2008
Last Login: Nov. 3, 2011 |
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thor23 4 years, 8 months ago
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original!i like it |
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thor23 4 years, 9 months ago
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Thanks,man you haven't heard the best yet,look for the next chapter soon! |
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thor23 4 years, 9 months ago
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well done!Great start,have a few ideas for next chapter but waiting to see where you go with it. |
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thor23 4 years, 9 months ago
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thanks for the input.i really appreciate it. |
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thor23 4 years, 9 months ago
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very well done.GREAT start,would like to read more! |
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thor23 4 years, 9 months ago
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different,but it has potential.hard to get into the flow of the story the way it is!! |
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thor23 4 years, 9 months ago
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NICE i like it alot!grabbed me and pulled me in and won't let go!Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
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17 Chapters by thor23
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3.8/5.0 - published Nov 20, 2009 - 3 comments (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Nov 11, 2009 - no comments (preview)
the story of a man who was ready to fight "life" on it's level.
Tags: mystery |
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3.1/5.0 - published Aug 24, 2008 - 2 comments
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3.1/5.0 - published Aug 17, 2008 - 2 comments
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3.9/5.0 - published Aug 15, 2008 - no comments
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3.4/5.0 - published Aug 12, 2008 - 2 comments
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2.9/5.0 - published Aug 10, 2008 - 1 comment
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3.7/5.0 - published Aug 10, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
This is just part 1 but it is getting kind of long so i am breaking it up into chapters.
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3.5/5.0 - published Aug 08, 2008 - no comments
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3.4/5.0 - published Aug 08, 2008 - 2 comments
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3.1/5.0 - published Aug 06, 2008 - 1 comment
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3.3/5.0 - published Aug 06, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Aug 05, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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2.7/5.0 - published Aug 03, 2008 - 1 comment
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3.5/5.0 - published Aug 03, 2008 - 2 comments
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3.6/5.0 - published Aug 02, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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2.9/5.0 - published Aug 02, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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