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thor23

Date Joined: Aug. 2, 2008
Last Login: Nov. 3, 2011

7 Comments by thor23

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0 thor23 4 years, 8 months ago Context

original!i like it


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1 thor23 4 years, 9 months ago Context

Thanks,man you haven't heard the best yet,look for the next chapter soon!


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1 thor23 4 years, 9 months ago Context

well done!Great start,have a few ideas for next chapter but waiting to see where you go with it.


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2 thor23 4 years, 9 months ago Context

thanks for the input.i really appreciate it.


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1 thor23 4 years, 9 months ago Context

very well done.GREAT start,would like to read more!


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1 thor23 4 years, 9 months ago Context

different,but it has potential.hard to get into the flow of the story the way it is!!


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1 thor23 4 years, 9 months ago Context

NICE i like it alot!grabbed me and pulled me in and won't let go!Can't wait to read the next chapter!


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